[Athen] ATHEN's response to the section 508 update
Sean J Keegan
skeegan at stanford.edu
Wed Mar 7 14:14:16 PST 2012
> Sean - For clarification, were you talking about just
> getting rid of that middle paragraph thus keeping the
> paragraph about DRM?
Yes - keep the first and last paragraph and remove the middle. The DRM
content appears very relevant to that section.
Take care,
Sean
On 3/7/12 2:07 PM, Hunziker, Dawn A - (hunziker) wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I too am sorry for jumping in so late - "sick" season has arrived late and unfortunately hit me this year.
>
> Anyway, I think Sean makes a good point about recommending specific technology standards and keeping to just the first paragraph. Sean - For clarification, were you talking about just getting rid of that middle paragraph thus keeping the paragraph about DRM?
>
> Joe - I'm attaching another version where I added some grammar suggestions. Overall, I think the document is nicely written!
>
> ~~
> Dawn Hunziker
> Assistive Technology Coordinator
>
> Disability Resource Center
> 520-626-9409
> hunziker at email.arizona.edu
>
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